Quote Originally Posted by Sharpienads View Post
That's pretty good, but I think the colon should be a semi-colon and take out the commas around the word perhaps.

"The situation in Mesoamerica contrasts strongly; that area provided only two domesticable animals (the turkey and the dog), whose meat yield was far lower than that of cows, sheep, goats, and pigs, and corn, Mesoamerica's staple grain, was difficult to domesticate and perhaps slow to develop."
I can't explain it in English but I 'm pretty sure about that colon.
And I think you are right about "perhaps".
Also this part is kinda confuses me "... goats, and pigs, and corn, Mesoamerica's.... " i think there're too many "and" or there should be something different after the "and pigs".