I thought this was well said....

[bczandm]

[cstone]

It certainly short and to the point. We don't often see such brevity.

[spqrzilla]

I dunno, I think that in the fifth paragraph, the author got lost and started flailing about with the third thesis' conclusion.

[Irving]

Whatever happened to beginning, middle, and end?

[Aloha_Shooter]

It's all good.

[Great-Kazoo]

Less use of CAPITAL'S more use of punctuation.
REMEMBER They're = They ARE Going to work. not, Their going to work {incorrect}

[hghclsswhitetrsh]

That danged ol bczandm doesn't post much, but boy when he does...

[Ronin13]

You guys are hilarious!
Every time someone posts something from email rather than attachment or web url I think God kills a kitten. STOP DOING IT! Think of the innocent little kitttens!!!

[asmo]

tl;dr

[Irving]

tl;dr

Winner